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All Deviations
All Deviations


Slow dancing though the world I once knew,
Trying much too hard to track down all that once was me.
Tripping down the faerie tale lane that I used to know so well.
Let the dreams take me where they will after all that's been.
Never a matter of when, but where.
Let that which you are carry me away into what's been so wholly lost.
See the world through blinded eyes.
Know there's no stopping the spinning alleyways.
There's nothing like you.
There's nothing like me and you.
I forget the will to care, the will to stand before it all comes down.
Never an emotion for taste.
Write with broken fingers for endless copies.
Worldly wonder of what the difference is between what I am and what I want to be.
Desecrated endless ironies shakng the foundation of 'I'.
Quiet moments of aloneness and tired reveries.
Forgotten things I thought I lost but never had.
There is the endless night-day spills.
Feeling wide open and uncaressed in the dream.
There is no escape because there isn't a thing to escape from.
Endless, and endless and echoes in the emptiness that is all.
Never, always, forever.
End.
©2003-2008 ~mistressmirandah
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I wrote this one just before I left for Saskatchewan. It's very muddled, but I think I like it that way. That's exactly how I was feeling when I wrote it.
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~disdainfulvision:icondisdainfulvision: Aug 31, 2003, 10:13:41 PM
I see you spinning, constantly twirling through this poem as it unveils. Never stopping until the very necessary 'end'

The human condition, our struggle with who why are, why we are, where we are... our need for re-assurance, our need for the need of others...

You writing sends me in a trance every time. Sometimes I don't feel like waking... I don't think anybody else's poetry does that for me... more people need to read this. I'll add it to my VAST (2) list of favourites

Marius

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~jphnx22:iconjphnx22: Apr 6, 2004, 6:00:51 PM
This is great. There are so few poems that pull draw you back and pull you in to read it just one more time. I was captivated by this piece.

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~mistressmirandah:iconmistressmirandah: Apr 6, 2004, 7:37:22 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it, it's one of my own favourites.

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We see the light and know that it is neither shining from heaven
nor from the end of a long tunnel.
We thrive in the darkness, not afraid to close our eyes and just feel,
just be for a moment.
we are poets by Monica S. Kuebler